Tag: recount

Recount Structure – Tree

For Writing I made a poster showing the structure of a recount which is tree. The four parts of the structure are Tree, Reveal, Event, Ending. The most important parts of a recount is the Reveal and the Events. Reveal needs to have the five Ws which are who, when, what, where, and why. The events need to be in chronological order. The ending is what you enjoyed, what you did well  and what  you need to improve on. My first task was to make a accrostic poem of TREE. I also wrote the three things that need to be in a recount which are time connectives. Past tense and adjectives.

I enjoyed making it look appealing.

What I did well was write what the five Ws are in the recount.

I need to improve on adding the information.

The Vacation Problem

We have been learning how to write recounts using the TREE structure.  We had to chose an image to inspire an imaginative recount.  Here is my work.

 

Two weeks ago I went on a vacation to an uncanny house in the middle of the   sea. I stayed there for three nights but as soon as I got there I wanted to leave straight away.  It was too late because the ship sailed off and I was trapped here for three nights.

First we grabbed our furniture and stayed at the very top but there was an issue. Our fridge was too hefty to carry so we emptied the fridge by putting our food in a box but there was another problem. Our box was too heavy and my mum got mad so we just threw the groceries into the sea and down went the snacks. My mum called a crane to come and they said yes but it cost 5 billion dollars so we brought it and it took 7 disturbing hours to get here. 

Next I sat on the sand eating cooked fish we fished out from the sea. I only got a little bit because we caught a [adjective] sardine. After we ate dinner, I played on my PC but there was another problem. There was no internet so it was a waste of time to bring my PC. My mum called a ship to take us to the shop to buy us [adjective] clothes and a souvenir from the market but the ship was a market. I only brought a turtle necklace because I love turtles. I went back to the hotel and swam in the beach but there was ANOTHER problem. A poisonous octopus sent out so many hungry baby octopi and they were all attached to me so we cooked them as well as the enormous octopus. 

Then I went to sleep for the first night but there was still ANOTHER problem. A ship was honking at a dolphin for having a hole in its head so I went outside and yelled. GO AWAY CAUSE I’M TRYING TO SLEEP! So when he left said “I had the worst day of my life”. The next morning I had hermit crabs and they were delicious. I went outside and yelled at the dolphin for having the hole on its head and the guy from last night who got yelled at by me said I CALLED THE POLICE ON YOU. So that’s why I swam 45 miles back home to get my 1 centimeter water gun and swam back  so I can spray him.

 

I enjoyed eating octopus. I felt sick and started vomiting.