Thunder storm crashed through the night carrying a leafy smell that would change the world. A tall robo lifted his head and was running and screaming from the sound. He looked human except for his weird shaped body and his christmassy look.He blinked in surprise. The message had been correct: they were here. Or could I find the way out? He weighed the odds, then said ,”Who are you? Find the passageway. “
For writing we learned about suspenseful writing and how we can write a suspenseful beginning by using imagery and dialogue. Suspenseful is like when you watch a movie and at the end of the movie it will say to be contuined which will make people interested in the next movie which will want people to send money on watching new movies. Suspense is a feeling of excitement or uncertainty about what will happen next. Imagery means using using descriptive language to create mental pictures or sensory experiences. Dialogue is a conversation between characters.
I enjoyed doing this task
I did well at writing the characters name
I will improve on dialouges